Well, here I go. The song for me is quite good, although certainly many sounds can still be improved, and I'm not talking about the quality itself, but the style. As a remix of "Sandstorm", it should have a more similar rhythm (it's my personal opinion, don't ban me xd), and well that's the only observation. Now, forgetting that the songs support a relationship, your song as an independent song is almost perfect. My congratulations and I hope you continue to work hard on this, you are very good.

Random GOD song xd